Tuesday, March 24, 2015

Equally Aliens


About 320 million “aliens” currently reside in the United States (US Census). They are everywhere. Around the corners, driving, attending universities, working, and even roaming the halls of the White House. These “aliens” have made the United States States their homeland since the 18th century and have paradoxically created a “land of the free”. By the turn of the 21st century, immigration became a crucial issue in American politics. In 2001, the Unites States border patrol was reinforced and deportation rates increased by the year. In 2010, President Obama signed Differed Action for Childhood Arrivals, and in 2014, he signed another deportation waiver for American citizens’ parents. Immigration is the issue we all see and fail to accept: it is the issue that can be solved through amnesty potentially creating great economical input and adding to the cultural diversity the United States posses. Democrats fight for immigration stability and uphold the financial uplift an amnesty will create in the country. Republicans, on their side, counter argue the fiscal burden of supporting the new American citizens fearfully watching how their nation’s purity diminishes by the daily influence of many different cultures migrating.


Ed Butowsky, owner of a private investment and financial advisory firm for wealthy individuals, noticeable economics critic , and political extremist, recently spoke out against amnesty and its cost to the Unites States. Butowsky blames the 5 million immigrants who qualify for amnesty, under certain restrictions, for $70 billion of our current national deficit. He calculated a $24,000 individual immigrant cost with a minimal $10,000 contribution each. He argue that amnesty will not fix the problem of immigration because it is so much more expensive to have this population legalized in the country and having to pay a quote for them adding up to our already $18 trillion national debt (Ed Butowsky, “We cannot afford amnesty for illegal immigrants” ).

However, immigrants under amnesty will be tracked down. They will be taken into account during yearly revenue calculations and pay more taxes than what they already do. More of these immigrants will be able to build credit and buy houses adding to tax paying revenues and diminishing the current housing crisis. Illegal immigrants will be able to pay any amount of money they previously owe to the country because all their debts will show up when applying for legalization. Applicants will also pay processing fees if amnesty was to be granted. Those who qualify will pay for immigration processes, including fingerprints and paper work, lawyer services to safely file for benefits, and any other additional requirements to prove their legitimacy as a resident in the country. Now multiply that by three, four, five, or even six family members in just one household in the nation.

Immigration has a solution and we all know it. It is time to give illegal immigrants the opportunity to strive for a better life. Americans must leave aside the wrong connotations that the word “immigrant” or “alien” contain. They should not be afraid of others not looking or acting like thems because this country is a timeless melting pot. Nicholas Kristof, op-ed columnist for The New York Times, warns of the “illegal parasites” that will contribute, through a legalization, to “$45 billion over five years in payroll taxes”. He comments on the erratic perspectives of current American citizens that feel at threat by undocumented immigrants because they are an “echo of the anxiety” that arises from living among different people (Nicholas Kristof, “Immigration Enriches You and Me” ). The daily citizen is not scared of terrorism, or that their neighbor, who is not an “American”, might secretly plot a destructive genocide in major cities. They are scared, truly terrified, of that same neighbor assimilating to their lifestyle, bringing with new customs and traditions from their own countries, and putting at risk the “American purity” they wish to conserve.


Legalization of illegal immigrants is a matter of agreement. Politicians know that immigration cannot be controlled because it has never been controlled at all in U.S history. The pilgrims opened up the way to newcomers to the United States, other Europeans followed, Asians continued, and now Latin American populations have rushed to have a share of this marvelous country as well. This nation resembles an ice cold water bottle in the middle of the desert. When an immigrants feels distorted in their own country they look for options to survive. They seek this water bottle in isolation and dryness. The United States is the last resort any immigrant has. They just don’t wake up one day and plan their travel across oceans, violent countries, and dry lands to arrive in the U.S and rest under a fresh Florida palm.

Amnesty is the solution to the immigration problem. Like or not, immigration will continue to happen in the United States. The United States is the promising land many people dream of. This nation wanted to proudly and fiercefully spread their “White Supremacy” during the imperialist era and the same one that becomes so patriotic during war times. This the land where people help each other in need, fight for human rights around the globe, and land a helping hand during disasters. The United States is the home of the brave, but not so much the land of the free. Eleven millions undocumented people reside in the country trapped by erratic connotations and fighting against their own cultures influences in order to become part of a society that rejects them. Amnesty will not erased the pain immigrants undergo in their pursuit of a better life traveling to the United States, but it sure will help them feel safe in the nation they have grown roots in and form families.

12 comments:

  1. Make sure to italicize "The New York Times". It's great that you how both sides of each argument to let the reader know why there is an argument. Excellent work in showing how immigrants can be beneficial to the United States economy. In your first paragraph, it's good that your talking about the history behind the illegal aliens. When you write the word "immigrants" or "aliens", who are you quoting. Overall, you makes some persuasive points on who immigrant can change this nation for the better.

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  2. Your argument was really well written. This argument does a really good job at stating how illegal immigrants contribute to this country and why they should be given amnesty. You could have included how America was founded by illegal immigrants and it could have made your argument 10 times better then it already is.

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    1. The amount of evidence used in this piece makes the argument a lot more powerful. The audience is being educated with all of this useful information, but they are also learning about opposing sides which is very important to know. Including the metaphor of the water bottle made the paper easier and more enjoyable to read. It really puts this issue in perspective. In a time where decisions need to be made immediately, amnesty is a logical and effective solution. Although it seems most Republican politicians are more concerned with security, there are actually some politicians of the Republican party who support amnesty.In addition to that, there are some Democrats that are not in favor of amnesty.

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  4. Your claim was clear and persuasive. There were great ideas presented, especially how immigrants can build credit and be able to have a new life. There was a good balance between both sides. However, including " This nation wanted to proudly and fiercefully spread their “White Supremacy” during the imperialist era and the same one that becomes so patriotic during war times" seemed out of place. Overall, it was a solid argument made.

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  5. You did very well arguing for immigrants to be amnestied. Also, it is impressive that you went into detail on how the process will be if immigrants were to be legalized. Yes, the United States is like a bottle of water, great use of an analogy, who wouldn't want a sip of water that will make them better. One more thing, you also did well on balancing both sides of the argument, you were not too bias.

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  6. Your solution to the immigration problem is well done. You describe the process that undocumented immigrants will take during the application. You mentioned that most of the money if not all of the money will be billed to the undocumented immigrants making it pleasing to the American public.It also states the potential tax revenues that will arise because of amnesty. You give acknowledgement to our previous immigrants of how they too came to America in search of a better life. Overall the essay is very persuasive.

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  7. Your easy is very well written. Both sides are states very clearly. Pointing out the fact that immigration will never stop was great. There should definitely be something done with it already so we can move pass this issue and focus on other problems in the world. Your example of the U.S. being like a bottle of water was very true.

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  8. Both sides of this argument are stated and both are set with background information. Bringing up the Differed Action that Obama signed showed how there is already a plan in action showing that politicians are looking for a way to help everyone. You also included the one word that politicians and other Citizens label the immigrants showing there prejudice against them, "aliens". Using outside sources also helps educate your readers more about the matter.

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  9. In the your argument, you state some great points for both sides of the issue, but then you also added some of your own opinions into the argument. You stated in your argument that granting amnesty for immigrants will add to paying revenues and diminish the current housing crisis. This is a great and important benefit as to why amnesty should be granted for illegal immigrants but, we as citizens have to ask ourselves, how long do we have to wait until we see this change happen? How much money do we as taxpayer have to contribute to this issue? We as a country are taking a huge gamble hoping for a positive outcome and blinding ourselves from the worse. Making citizens live uncomfortably to grant amnesty for someone without citizenship so they can have a better life is preposterous. It justifies the dream that not only immigrants come here for and want, but also U.S. Citizens want which is the American Dream. We must first help ourselves before we can help others.

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  10. Great job on your argument you provided and great substantial amount of supporting evidence to your audience . You went over both sides for amnesty and against amnesty. You show the pros and the cons of both sides .

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  11. This argument was clear and provided enough evidence for both sides of the situation to be fully understood. Not only did you argue whyab immigrants should be granted amnesty, but you provided potential solutions for the issue and your position was clear throughout your work.

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